Coal Rivalry

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All the things Coal said, running through my head.

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Re: pettiness

[(Anonymous)]

So
"I guess." He shrugged.

Instead?

Re: pettiness

[(Anonymous)]

DC yes, dialogue, period, and then action in a new sentence is correct (I believe). Or:
"Like so," he said, shrugging.
"This, maybe," he said, and shrugged.

Re: pettiness

[(Anonymous)]

"But what if—" She shrugged. "—in the middle of the dialogue?"