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coalie ([personal profile] coalcube) wrote in [community profile] coaltide2022-12-25 04:57 pm
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Merry Crisis

On the 7th night of Hanukkah my vindictive author gave to me....

Madness Opens: Mon 26 Dec
Author Reveals: Sun Jan 1

Mini-Challenges:
Yuleporn| Crueltide | Queering The Tide | Transtide
Two for One | Seasons Treatings | IF | Wrapping Paper | Yumadrin 
 


Re: 3 Truths, 1 Lie

(Anonymous) 2022-12-28 05:33 pm (UTC)(link)
I read the Rusty Lake fic. It was pretty good! This is a nitpicky beta note, but I think I would have liked a little more variation in paragraph length? A meaty longer paragraph is good once in a while. I also wanted some of the paragraphs combined, like when you've got a paragraph of Ms Pheasant talking and then another paragraph of her thoughts.