Re: Three Truths, One Lie - non-experimental 4'33'' fics in Madness

(Anonymous) 2019-12-27 03:55 pm (UTC)(link)
First one's a poem, but it's pretty straightforward.

https://archiveofourown.org/collections/yuletidemadness2019/works/21360079

https://archiveofourown.org/collections/yuletidemadness2019/works/21829843

https://archiveofourown.org/collections/yuletidemadness2019/works/21856297

https://archiveofourown.org/collections/yuletidemadness2019/works/21956380

Re: Three Truths, One Lie - non-experimental 4'33'' fics in Madness

(Anonymous) 2019-12-28 05:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for putting these up - I'd been avoiding all of the 4'33" fics. 1 and 3 are definitely my favorites from this batch.

I really enjoyed the humor and 'throw it at the wall, see what sticks' rhyming of the first one.

The 2nd had some lovely external description, but I wish there had been more development of that internal, building anxiety.

The 3rd is a horror take, and it's excellent. Yikes.

The 4th is well-written, but because the narrator was such a cipher, I found I wasn't interested in the story.