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Re: Three Truths, One Lie

[(Anonymous)]

I don't know why nobody else seems to be playing, but I'll give it a go. Not done one of these before, so I'll be brief in case I'm doing it wrong! Full disclosure: I only know one of the fandoms well, and one very very vaguely.

1 (Us) - The concept is an interesting one and it seems to fit well with the recip's requests. The writing is a bit stilted and more tell than show. Could be good if worked on style and flow.

2. (Ramayana) - Some nice writing and imagery but overall I found it a bit confusing. Could be just that I'm tired.

3. (Six) - Really strong character voice though to me it sounds a bit more like Anne than Catherine - I feel like Catherine might be slightly more formal. It's engaging and there's some great insights. There's an odd use of "I" at one point that didn't make sense to me. Would have liked to see some actual interaction rather than just thoughts, but overall, I enjoyed it.

4. (Peaky Blinders) - lots of tiny vignettes, which is interesting and works well for the recip's preferences. Good insight into the character, I would have preferred a bit more dialogue. Not always 100% sure what was going on.

The last two are my favorites but that could be down to canon bias.

Re: Three Truths, One Lie

[(Anonymous)]

I think nobody else is playing because upthread is a mess.