Re: All of the issuefic

(Anonymous) 2019-12-25 10:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Ithink you're mildly missing the right tone here, trollie. You don't quite have a facility with the language. It would be much more natural to say "talking about anti-Blackness" (no hits on google for "talking about anti-Bllack issues," over 2k for "talking about anti-Blackness.") That also feels like a slightly off use of the word "swerve." It's not a swerve to tone police, it's entirely predictable. It'd be a swerve if they were pro the fic and then was like, "because it reveals all Black people are seditious" or whatever. You still get 6/10 for me, because going hard for the lions is a great wank maneuver. (If a bit reminiscent of channers thinking all Afrocentricism is ridiculous, but I'll allow it)

Re: All of the issuefic

(Anonymous) 2019-12-25 10:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Tf happened to my hard returns.